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Well done Raphelle, you have some great similes in your poem. I especially liked the way that you described how black sounds. I wonder if you could include more adjectives in the way that black smells - how could you describe the smoke? How could you describe the air?
Well done Raphelle, you have some great similes in your poem. I especially liked the way that you described how black sounds.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if you could include more adjectives in the way that black smells - how could you describe the smoke? How could you describe the air?